Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Saturday, August 14, 2021

Tired of Dealing with those Annoying Writing Errors?

As a writer, you know what I'm talking about. As a reader, you know what I'm talking about too. 


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Spelling errors. Grammar issues. Missing words. The wrong word.

As a writer, you think your book is as polished as it can get, and then you send it to a reviewer who sees what you missed. You're working on an audiobook [I would recommend doing an audiobook for anyone wanting to catch writing errors] and stuff creeps out of your book that you never knew existed.

If you're a reader, you don't like seeing writing errors either, or a missing word, or the wrong word, or anything that makes you stop to look at the error, especially when the mistake comes from a book published by a traditional publisher like Random House. 

The good news is that it happens. You can count on it. The bad news is that it happens too often, especially among indie authors. I can say this because it has happened to me as an indie author. It has happened even after I've done multiple edits, after I've sent it to an editor, yes, and even when I've been working through the process of an audiobook.

It happened to this one: 

 5.0 out of 5 stars

Reviewed in the United States on September 13, 2017
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5 Stars. I really enjoyed this book. It kept me guessing all the way through. There was a few editing issues
but nothing so bad to detract from my enjoyment of this mystery.

I was happy to receive 5 stars, but a 5-Star doesn't always happen with a book with "editing issues". As a head's up, the book is called Tie Died. Just saying...
I think it's important to note here for readers just how hard authors work to catch the errors you may see in the book you are currently reading, especially if they've gone through the ropes as mentioned above. 
When those spelling errors that I swear creep and hide between the book's binding when I'm not looking, make it to the final draft - yes, that one in your hands at this very moment - I hope you understand that I've done my best to sweep them out. 
To your writing!
Kathryn 
 



Wednesday, March 21, 2018

Thursday, August 31, 2017

Thursday, July 21, 2016

FINAL PROOF

Working on my final proof today for Hard Boiled.

Not my favorite task, but a very needed one.

After all of the editing and beta readers, it's taking one last look at my book with cover and formatting and checking those small errors that always seem to make it in the final proof.



Front cover and back cover once over

Weird paragraphing

Commas in strange places or no commas where there should be commas

Forgotten periods

Centering of chapter headings (even forgotten chapter headings. I've got one of those this time. No once caught it!

Quotation marks in the wrong places or no quotation marks where there should be quotations marks

Awkward sentences that no one else spotted

And so it goes...

Happy Writing! (and editing!)

Kathryn

Thursday, March 17, 2016

The Best Response to Criticism about Your Book

I have been writing for many years, and I still get that honest feedback most writers cringe about. I used to get upset for days, throw in the towel, and tell myself, I will never write another word again.

The next week I would try again, the sound of the voice almost as clear inside my head.

By the following week the voice would be gone, and in it's place new things to think about like character, setting and plot.

Who knew?

Through the years I have learned two simple words that most of the time stops the 'perpetrator' in their tracks.


THANK YOU.


You might hate what they've said but say thank you. They might add some additional feedback, feedback you might not have asked for in the first place, but remember to say thank you.

THANK YOU.

I'm hurting right now, YOU THINK TO YOURSELF, but thank you. In a few days I will look at your words again and make a decision on what I'm going to do about them. I will decide if I weed out what you've suggested or keep it. But thank you. You didn't have to say anything. You could have chosen to be silent, you could have chosen never to share with me your thoughts. 

So THANK YOU.

Be prepared for a YOU'RE WELCOME. It usually comes, and sometimes, if you hold out for a bit longer, trying with all of your might not to protect your baby by making excuses for it, you may here something like:

"But I really liked ..."



Thursday, January 21, 2016

Editing in the Works

Oh, that blissful chore that needs to be done before the beta readers take over!

Yes, I am in full swing of editing my third mystery, "Hard Boiled." And yes, it should be out in the spring. And yes, I go to bed, my eyes just a bit more sore than usual.

But it's all worth it!

I don't have a cover yet, but that's also in the works. Expect something with a black background. The eggs will probably be sitting on a black plate; one of them will be cracked. You know how it goes.

Anyway, expect to be reading the third installment of the Susan Cramer Mystery Series soon!


BOOK 1


BOOK 2


BOOK 3?
(COVER IS COMING!)

Wednesday, December 30, 2015

TOP 5 POSTS FOR DECEMBER 2015!

December is one of those interesting months. Folks are busy planning parties, shopping for gifts, and - dare I say it, taking a well-needed rest when they finally get a break.

I wanted to take just a pause today and share with you my top posts for December 2015. I wanted to know, if, during the month of December and all of its busyness, what my readers made time to read.

So here goes!

1. Patricia Kiyono is a well known author, so it's not a surprise that she comes in first. See her author interview here: http://idea-creations.blogspot.com/2015/12/author-interview-patricia-kiyono.html.



2. In second place is Nirit Littaney. An author of children's books, Nirit was excited for this interview - her first one! http://idea-creations.blogspot.com/2015/12/author-interview-nirit-littaney.html.

Nirit Littaney

3. Third is my post announcing my updating of marketing book, Marketing Your Book on a Budget 2016! You can find the post here: http://idea-creations.blogspot.com/2015/12/marketing-your-book-on-budget-2016.html.



4. Fourth place goes to author Julie Carobini! You can find her author interview here: http://idea-creations.blogspot.com/2015/12/author-interview-julie-carobini.html.



5. And finally, in fifth place, enjoy Editing to Death? by yours truly. You can find the post here: http://idea-creations.blogspot.com/2015/12/editing-to-death.html.



HANDS DOWN, author interviews have been the most read. I will continue these in the new year, so if you haven't interviewed with me and would like to, drop me a line at: kathy@ariverofstones.com.

Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Editing to death?

There's a secret about editing that I'd like to share with you - you may have even heard this little secret before, but even if you have, the saying bears repeating:

Editing can ruin your work.



What?

Or more directly, too much editing can ruin your work.

Perhaps you know what I'm talking about. Because your work is 'never good enough' you keep putting it through the ringer to get every 'problem' fixed. You work, not only on paragraphs, but lines, making sure each and every one would make your English teacher proud.

And in the interim?

You lose you.

You lose your writing voice, your style, the way YOU only you can put a sentence together. And what you have left is the shell of what you once wrote.

Don't do it.

Edit, yes. But edit and leave it alone.

I mean it.

It will be one of the best decisions you've ever made.




Thursday, May 28, 2015

Be Nice to Your Editor

We all have one, or should. This editor weeds out the bad stuff, helps us gather in the good stuff, and pretty much keeps us on track when it comes to misspelled, awkward and run-on sentences. But do we really have a clear idea what that means?

As an editor myself I have run into various stresses - dilemmas if you will - that challenge my mind and heart, keep me groping for the wall and wondering what the writer could be thinking.

I like editing, but I prefer writing. And I like an author who does what he or she is asked to do in the beginning stages of working through a manuscript, instead of holding off until the proof is out.

Still, this difficulty may be just as much my fault as it is theirs.



Communication is a grand key that opens doors; without it, both sides (within or without the door) are always guessing, always wondering what they should really be doing. So I've learned a lot from situations like this. I've learned that I must be clear about what I want the writer to check before the book goes into the proof stage. I must be much, much clearer than mud.

And this takes practice as well as patience. So when I say, "Be nice to your editor," I'm also saying to the editors, "Be nice to your writer," because as any writer knows, it takes tremendous courage to get those words out in the first place.




Tuesday, April 28, 2015

Your Book: Does it Feel Like Your Baby?

So many writers talk about this that I couldn't resist putting in a word for the feeling myself.

Yes, my work feels like I have created a baby, birthed it, and am sending my child out into the world. I think that's why it hurts so much when my baby is criticized.

I'm sure you feel the same. But I need to share something with you.

Once your baby leaves the nest, it's the world that's going to look at her, judge her for good or bad, spend time with her or not, and this, in reality, is a part of life.

I remember when I sent my first daughter off to kindergarten. I didn't think I was going to make it. I tried not to cry when she was standing there and I was giving her my - last - hug. Well, it felt like the last hug, and I cried all the way home. I couldn't even work that day, the fear of her well-being weighing so heavily on my mind. But in time, she came home, with grins and giggles about her first day at school and I knew everything was going to be alright.

Sending off your first book is more than a little like that. You wonder, "Will people like it?" The bad news, is that you're always going to wonder if people are going to like your book, whether your book is your first or your seventh, but the good news is, hearing the negative comments gets a little easier.

For my first book, A River of Stones, there were a few reviewers and readers that thought I was trying to convert them to the LDS religion. This wasn't the case. I simply shared a story of a young girl named Samantha and what helped her work through some of the hard times in her life when her parents divorced.

My second book, Conquering Your Goliaths: A Parable of the Five Stones, has offered readers an opportunity not only to read a story about a woman named Virginia and how God assisted her through the five stones, to overcome her Goliath, but gave readers an opportunity to look at their own life and see the changes for improvement they might make. Some readers didn't like this. They didn't like it that they had to look at their life.


I have had other comments for my mystery books. Some have liked them, others haven't. I have my own writing style, I know that, and I present my stories, mysteries and otherwise, in my way.

What you need to know is that criticism can be good and it can be bad. The most important thing about criticism is that you get to take a second look at your book. You can make a change on how you do things for your next book, or not. Just remember that sometimes the news you get isn't really accurate, rather someones own hang-ups coming out in a review or comment. Don't let these get to you. People aren't perfect, and that makes the reviews you receive less than perfect.

Your baby isn't perfect either. As she grows, you will find that there are things you can help her with, ways you can improve. This doesn't mean you're a bad writer, what it does mean is that there is always something to learn as a writer, just as a child learns as she grows to adulthood.

And that's what living on this earth is all about.

Tuesday, April 21, 2015

Writing Until it Hurts

Recently, I've had some trouble with my back. Seems like I got a bit anxious doing my Wii exercising one morning :)

This back pain affects everything in my day, from housecleaning to writing. And although I don't recommend having back pain to get yourself thinking about the often grim pains of writing, rewriting, editing and such, the pain sure makes me think of all the things that have to be done despite the nuisance of it.

I remember the pain I felt when I wrote my first novel. Not only was the experience new for me, I was often writing scenes that reflected my own life, dialogue that wasn't too far removed from the pain I'd experienced as a child when my parents divorced.

The good news is that once my mother remarried her 'match' the pain of separation from my father diminished somewhat, though the pain was still there. And because of this pain - did I cause the divorce? Was it my fault that my parents had been continually angry at one another all of the time?
I was able to write A River of Stones, a middle reader about a girl named
Samantha and how she got through her own parents divorce.


Other books have held various 'truths' about my own life, including Conquering Your Goliaths: A Parable of the Five Stones. The five stones - listening, trust, optimism, tenacity and constancy, are a part of my own life as I attempt to conquer my goliaths, and there were times when writing this book that it 'hurt' to record, though I know that recording it has ultimately helped others.

And I think that's why it's so important to write until it hurts. You are hopefully not only writing to share your talent, you're writing to assist someone else to 'see' in their own life. And that's when writing for me makes the biggest shift, the biggest difference.




Thursday, April 16, 2015

SNOW? What it has to do with your writing

Have you ever written something that didn't quite - fit?

Is your main character expressing herself in ways she shouldn't? Do you have a particular scene that seems dropped in by some romance author even though your book is science fiction?

I've had this happen and it's a little like the snow we're having in April.



Yes, it snowed yesterday, heavily. My grandchildren were even able to build a fort with it. And although they were enjoying it (I was trying to) I just couldn't get past the fact that it was April and it was snowing like it should have snowed in January.

And I couldn't help it. I thought about writing and all of the times I've had to do a little bit of weeding under the snow.

And it's hard, let me tell you.

But I've learned something important about taking care of it as soon as I see it.

The longer the snow sits, the harder it is to get to the weeds.

If you're finding it hard to weed out that chapter or that line or that scene that doesn't quite 'fit' into your story, think about it this way. You can save it for later. Maybe later you can use it in another book. But even if you don't, the shoveling is still important.

I promise.

Kathryn

Tuesday, April 7, 2015

Dream On...

I love dreams, at least the good ones. I love soaking in the potential of my latest book, my next writing class, my next mentoring session.

Dreams are important.

But even with dreams, work is required.

I don't know about you, but I'd like to think that my greatest dreams come because I've put some footwork and real heart into the matter. I don't just expect the 'dream' to come to me, rather what I expect is the dream to manifest itself because I've put all I have into it.

If not for the work as well as the dream, most of our wishes for the future would be as real as doughnuts falling from the sky - our favorite, chocolate cake.

There's no such thing?

You've got it.

I'd like to think that after all the hours of writing and editing and yes, even marketing, something magical begins to happen. Like, I get better, I produce something worth reading, that I grow.

And that's when dreaming really counts.

Kathryn

Thursday, April 2, 2015

First Draft Revisions Made Easy


As some of you may know, I've been working on the third book in the parable series entitled, The Gift: A Parable of the Key, which will be hitting the online sky waves come September. 

Since I'm sitting here in this very category at this very minute, I thought it would be the right time to talk about first drafts.

Here are some things I am noticing where revisions are necessary.

1. Typos.
2. Sentence structure issues.
3. Necessary plot insertions.
4, Sentence clarification issues.
5. Word choice.

Allow me to tackle each of these revision issues briefly:

1. Typos are probably one of the most difficult things to catch unless you're red flagged by your computer. Some typos are obvious, others, well, try reading your story out loud to get those pesky typos out of your work.

2. Again, reading out loud will help with sentence structure issues. If you don't want to read your work out loud (though I highly recommend it) consider any time you stop at a sentence and have to re-read it, or you find yourself wondering what you meant.

3. I have a scene in my book that I've added to the plot since the first write, and I may find as I continue to read that another one is necessary. I noticed the vacancy of this scene when I got to a particular scene and realized that there was not enough previous set-up to make the scene believable.

You can't have people angry, for example, unless there are scenes previous to the explosion that sets everything up. When the explosion finally happens, the reader says in their head, "Well, yes, I can see that happening, when they did this and this..."

4. I may have thought my sentence was as clear as the day sky when I wrote it, only to re-read and discover the skies were likely filled with black clouds. Sometimes, to clarify the sentence, I must add to the sentence, at other times I must start completely over.

5. I don't know how many times I re-read only to find that a certain word 'just doesn't fit' with the scene. Either the word is too harsh or too soft, or a particular character uses it; one I might add, that wouldn't for the life of them use that particular word.

First drafts might be a bit - tedious - but consider the improvement of your work after the first draft is finished. You wouldn't want to send your beta readers a manuscript riddled with weeds anyway and focusing on these editing issues early on will make their reading experience that much sweeter.




Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Struggling to Get Published?



Okay, so you're tired of dealing with the miss-spelled words, the awkward sentences, the paragraphs that need to be shifted, the chapters taken out, the character's weeded, the setting upgraded, the plot - fixed, and let's see, you're tired of this run-on sentence.

If you've tried and failed to be perfect at your writing and failed, welcome to the club - the Sunshine Club.

The Sunshine Club is for all of those writers who have tried and failed at writing, and may not, as of yet, published a book although it's been roughly 10 years since their writing journey began.

Ten years??

Ten years isn't actually that long. I can honestly say it took me longer than ten to get my first book published. My first article was published eight years after taking pen to paper, and my first book came say, fifteen years after that.

Granted, I did do a lot of journalism during that time (which has really helped me through the years I'll tell you) and I went to college and obtained my degree in Mass Communication. But I had to wait quite a few years to see that first book in print.

I was at the Sunshine Club quite a few years with my fellow writers, struggling to get something published. We would weep on each other's shoulders, talk about the mean and nasty editors and/or agents until our lips were blue, and whined about how hard everything was, how terribly long it was taking.

And then someone quite friendly in the group would say, "Well, you know, you can't expect to get published until you've been through the work."

And I thought, I couldn't help it but I thought, "Well, what about those famous people who have never written a word in their life, who get published right away because of their name?"

Of course I know now that famous people don't count. Not that their books aren't occasionally - good, it's just that they're on a different path than most writers who have to prove something to even get a casual look see.


And, honestly, there is something quite amazing to be said for a writer who has struggled and learned and struggled some more before someone actually sees them.

If you are willing to stick it out when times are tough, when no one will read your stuff, or everyone tells you your stuff is great even though they've probably never read it, or worse, have read it but don't want to hurt your feelings by telling you the truth. If you're willing to stick your neck out and admit that your story, book, or article could be better, and are more than willing to learn from your mistakes. If you're willing to trash an entire scene, an entire chapter, an entire book that isn't going to make the grade...

Then guess what?

You're a writer.

See you at the Sunshine Club.

Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Making Changes in Writing and in Life

It's been made clear to me, especially lately, that making changes in writing and in life is the name of the game.

And change isn't always easy.


But it's exciting!

Who wouldn't want to make their writing better, more coherent, more exciting to read? Who wouldn't want to take their own life out of the pit of boredom, sameness? Who wouldn't want to take the next grand opportunity for growth when presented?

I know I would.

Still, change can be pretty scary, too, though I'm one for moving through it anyway. Who knows what will be on the other side of it?

A better book?

A better life?

Here's hoping you make today better than yesterday.


Kathryn


Thursday, March 26, 2015

WRITE HERE IN EPHRAIM CONFERENCE this Friday and Saturday!

IN ITS 5TH YEAR, "WRITE HERE IN EPHRAIM" IS CENTRAL UTAH'S WRITING CONFERENCE WHERE PUBLISHED AUTHORS GIVE INSTRUCTION ON WRITING. THE CONFERENCE IS AN OPPORTUNITY FOR UP-AND-COMING WRITERS TO GAIN NEW SKILLS AND ENCOURAGEMENT IN THEIR CRAFT.
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WOW! Write Here in Ephraim is now offering PITCH SESSIONS where you can meet with publishers to tell them all about your story! Please contact Keani at Netherfield Publishing to set up your time to shine! keani.gifford@netherfieldpublishing.com 
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