Wednesday, July 9, 2014

Sunny Side-Up NEW COVER and PROLOGUE!

Okay, things are heating up quite nicely for my newest book, Sunny Side-Up, (Book Two) in the Susan Cramer Mystery Series to be released in October 2014!

New cover!

Here's the blurb that will be on the back of the book:

"Susan Cramer was desperately in need of a vacation, but not at the expense of another dead man."

            A leisurely vacation turns deadly when an old man falls dead at Susan's feet on the cruise ship Aloha.

            Was she some sort of death magnet?
           
            Maybe so. Maybe not.

            One thing was for sure. Through the lies, secrets, and surprises to be discovered on board and off, Susan will learn at least one important thing, and this thing called "love" will be something she wished had never followed her out to the high seas.


 PROLOGUE:

The old man wore a black suit, a starched white shirt and a black bow tie, the standard fare for men of his age. They were both on a cruise ship, and though she didn't really know him, they’d been speaking. At least, she'd been speaking. The man was drunk and could hardly stand; he'd kept asking her to repeat herself.
She'd been speaking about her divorce and subsequent trip when his blue-gray eyes had clouded over and he'd collapsed in a heap in front of her.
She'd reached for him, of course. But his body had slipped through her fingers like a fish in shallow water.  He'd tried to breathe, taking in two shallow gasps. But he was lying there now, his blistered face to the sky, his eyes staring, his left leg bent behind him in some sort of twisted leap. He was dead, Susan was sure of that.
            “Help!” she screamed, watching the dance floor for someone, anyone...
            And then suddenly, she was there, an old woman in a gold dress, her bronzed skin twinkling against the burnished fabric. She leaned over the man.
            “What happened?” the old woman's voice quivered. It reminded Susan of a child’s.
            As the salty air caressed Susan's cheeks, she looked out at the great blue ocean for only a moment and thought of Henry.
            “I…I don’t know, we were just talking.”
            The woman in gold, her hair perfectly coiffed, reached for the man’s wrist. And in that moment Susan saw Henry James as John Middleton, lying dead by the old coal burning stove at the Hotel Camaro.
            The woman was sobbing, leaning over the man, trying to shake him awake.
            “What did you do?” she wailed. Her eyes were a blotchy black and mascara was running down her naked neck.
            Susan looked away.
The champagne glass near the deck’s railing had spilled. The place where it lodged was a red and sticky, wet.
            “I can’t wake him!”
            The waves must have crashed against the large cruise ship, but Susan hardly noticed; she barely saw those who had suddenly gathered around her including the face of Charles, one of the officers on board ship. He pronounced the man dead.
            “But, how can he be…dead?” the old woman gasped, holding her chest, breathing in the sea air in shuddering gasps.
Susan stood next to the railing. She looked out at the sea and wasn't sure when the old man was taken away with his sobbing wife. How had she gotten to the railing anyway? Why was the man dead? And just as important, who had killed him?
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Comments or questions? Would you like to review the book for me in exchange for a free copy? Contact me at: kathy@ariverofstones.com.

Haven't read book one yet? Find it here.





Tuesday, July 8, 2014

5+ Things to Look for in Choosing Free Editors/Critiquers for Your Book



I don't know what it is about us writers, (maybe it's because most of us are poor) but we are constantly striving to find new and improved ways to get the writing work done without shelling out the dough.

Don't get me wrong. I think, because we are also creative types, that we feel as if we can do it all (or at the very least) feel as if we can get everyone else to do it for us for free.

And while this may be true in many respects, it's the word "respect" that I want to focus on today, for, although you may ask your best friend to help you edit and/or critique your latest novel, it may not be in your best interest to do so, at least not with this particular friend.

Let explain:

When it comes to editing a piece of work it's not enough for the reader to say, I liked it, or it was good, right? You need more concrete answers like, the plot seems to have some holes in it, and this is where I found them or, the main character didn't feel strong enough to me. It was almost like the secondary characters ran the novel.

While it is true that there are various editing styles, from the English teacher grammar generals to the general reader types, it's important to get just the right friends and acquaintances to look over your work.

Here are some guidelines I use when deciding who to have read my work:

1. I like them to be well-read in the genre in which I'm having them assist me. It's much harder to get clear answers when the individual is struggling to understand your fantasy world (having never before read a fantasy).

2. I like them to be honest with solutions. If they have a concern, I want to know what it is and WHY they have the concern. It doesn't work for me to have a person say, I didn't like this part, and leave it at that.

3. I like to have a combination of English teacher types and book reader types. Each type of reader focuses on different aspects of the book so I get a well-round list of ideas to improve my work.

4. Free editors/critiquers can be found online, but I would be wary of asking anyone in which you haven't yet learned more about. Most usually charge anyway. If someone wants to swap books with you for an edit, just make sure you swap with someone who has read your genre and vice versa.

5. If you've previously used someone to edit/critique your book and they were about as focused on getting it accomplished as a turtle, consider finding someone else. It's difficult for many readers to stay motivated (even if they like you) without pay, and you may find that another reader will be more prompt in returning your manuscript when you need it.

6. Be clear about your expectations especially when asking family to edit/critique your work. You want honest feedback, not some warm fuzzy drama about everything you've put on the paper.

All in all, free editors/critiquers are a bit like the icing on the cake. While there are some friends out there who like to help, and like reading enough to help you, not everyone will have the time or interest.

And that's good because you only want the best.

Monday, July 7, 2014

Author and Character Interviews



Are you an author soon to publish his/her first book? Is your main character something to write home about?

I'm currently near the tail end of scheduled interviews for this year and would love to interview you or your main character or both!

Just drop me a line at kathy@ariverofstones.com and I'll send you the list of questions!

Keep in mind that this is a family friendly site, and that I'm only particular when it comes to books that cross over the PG-13 line, so keep that in mind when requesting an interview.

Author and character interviews are the most popular viewed posts on my site, and so if you're looking for a free way to get your name out there, I'm here to help!

Kathryn